Do you ever read your writing aloud? It’s an easy technique that can help
us find our "voices". If you’re writing fiction you are going to want each
character to sound unique. They each need to have their own vocabularies, their
own idioms. The way they express themselves will give your readers clues as to
who they are and where they come from. Reading any dialogue or interior
monologue aloud will help you work out if you are being consistent.
As well as reading aloud, ask yourself some questions about each
character. You might think about these as you’re writing; you might think of
them when you’re editing; or you may define your characters’ voices before you
introduce them. Here are a few questions to help you on your way:
1. What
level of language do they speak? Do they use slang, or perhaps a lot of
jargon? Do they use abstract or concrete expressions?
2. Do
they make a lot of references to pop culture, or perhaps to travels they have
undertaken? Do they refer to art and literature; are their conversations
about watching the football on TV, or playing tennis?
3.
Do
they usually use long or short sentences when they speak? Are they complex
sentences? Do they use a variety of sentence structures?
4.
How
large is the character’s vocabulary? Do they spend their time reading
literature, or popular magazines, or both? What kinds of words are they most comfortable with?
Each time you put words into a character’s mouth you are telling your
reader more about that character. You need your characters to be believable, so
match their language with their background and experience.
And remember to read your work aloud. It will help you discover if it’s
you, the writer, on the page, or if you have succeeded in bringing your
characters to life.
Great advice!! I read almost everything aloud, and usually to my hubby, who is a great sounding board. Think I'll print up your suggestions to keep in mind as I'm reading and editing!!
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